Writing Question
Hi, the assignment has already been completed but it needs to be revised based on my professor’s feedback. The first document that I attached is the essay that needs to be revised. The second document I attached goes into detail of what my professor wants fixed.
Professor’s feedback: Hi, I know you worked very hard on this paper. The abstract and introduction and discussion all need to be edited. The direction of the Thesis is supposed to be focused on what Total Worker Health Is, Benefits of integrating into a Safety and Health program, and how it reduces injuries and illness when you address the total worker. I’ve included an attachment with a break down of what the abstract should include along with my thoughts in blue type. Please let me know if you have questions. The fourth document is my annotated bibliography.
Write a persuasive essay/research paper in APA 7 format. My Thesis Statement: Total Worker Health addresses the whole worker, including their emotional, mental, and physical self, all of which impacts the probability of injury and illness on the job. Organizations should integrate Total Worker Health into the Safety & Health Management System to decrease injury and illness on the job. The third document is the assignment instructions so that you know what it was all about. The fifth document is a copy of one of the articles I used.
REQUIRED COMPONENTS:
- Title page
- Abstract
- Introduction (please refer to attached “how to write a research paper” for specific details to follow)
- Findings
- Conclusions and recommendations
- Reference page- I’ve attached the annotated bibliography.
Please use the attached ‘how to write a research paper’ to ensure it is detailed and follows the formula. a.My
Thesis Statement: Total Worker Health addresses the whole worker, including their emotional, mental, and physical self, all of which impacts the probability of injury and illness on the job. Organizations should integrate Total Worker Health into the Safety & Health Management System to decrease injury and illness on the job.
