Research Paper I need Only: Research question + thesis statement + outline + five sources

I did my paper (you can see in the attachemnet) and I got comments from my teacher to edit my submission as you see:

( I see by your proposal that you have picked a good topic and have begun to do your background research – however, I need you to revise and resubmit your topic. What you put on the assignment you turned in is much too broad – and might work for a Master’s level thesis, meaning it is much too much for a paper of this length. You should pick just one of the example you note – such as the Protocol against the smuggling of Migrants by land, sea and air, or you could go back to the original convention – Convention against Transnational Crime. But covering all human trafficking law would be too much.)

This is the assignment direction and follow the directions

International Law

Research Paper

Your assignment is to research and analyze an international law created in response to an international issue. For example, you could focus on one treaty or one institution (e.g., created to adjudicate international law). The purpose of the paper is to evaluate the issue area surrounding the law, and the behavior(s) of states in order to evaluate the effectiveness of the international law you have chosen.

Parts of the Assignment:

1. Topic and Sources

The Topic should include 3 parts:

(a) the research question(s) you plan to consider,

(b) your thesis statement (2-3 sentences) introducing your paper and outlining the event you have chosen, and

(c) at least five sources to be used (e.g., one book, one journal, one scholarly website). Include a Reference/Bibliography page and cite using Chicago Citation style at least 5 different sources. You may use scholarly journals, books, government documents and web sites (including at least one book and one journal) for your sources. Encyclopedias including internet encyclopedias (wikipedia,, etc.) are not scholarly sources and should not be used as references for your paper.

2. Outline (full outline)

You must submit an outline of the paper that includes your thesis statement and all of the parts of the paper with enough description of each item to indicate that you have been working on the assignment.

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