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I would like for this paper to be addressed with the corrections indicated. Two papers have been attached, please take a look at them and make to create a more understanding paper. Thx.(comparative analysis, address all of the worldview questions in detail for Christianity and your selected faith. Refer to chapter 2 of the Called to Care for the list of questions. Be sure to address the implications of these beliefs for health care).
*Source support needed throughtout
*Identify and develop specific elements of the belief system (use a chart with sources cited in the chart)
*Be specific on component/practices of healing and are for Christian and Buddhism. (These are key elements of the assignment)
*Use major headings, as well, to identify more clearly and sufficiently the key assignment elements.
*religious beliefs need to be clearly and fully developed with the paper
*Perspectives and components of healing of Christianity and chosen other religion identified? Needs to be significantly identified. Few general spiritual perspectives discussed. What are specific components/practices of healing and care a Christian or a Buddhist patient would draw upon while under care in a local hospital?
*Perspectives and components of healing of Christianity and chosen other religion compared and/or contrasted? Needs to be significantly developed.
Discussion of being cared for by HCP of different faith? Yes.
A description of what was learned from research? *Needed to be addressed.
Abstract? No. An abstract should be brief statement to include purpose/thesis, methodology, observations, and results/outcomes. Review APA guidelines (see Student Success Center>Writing Center; or, google Purdue Owl). Separate page, after title page.