i want to edit my thesis statement because i’m missing each of the discrete parts. so i need a strong opinion. i will attach a powerpoint so you can follow the instructions. also, i’m going to attach the instructions for the whole topic.
assignment : Beyonce Knowles’s “Formation” music video, released in 2016, is more than just a pop culture music video made for mere entertainment value. “Formation” is rife with allusions to the American Civil Rights movement, historically and as it is carried through today. We have discussed and analyzed many aspects of the video in class. For this assignment, consider the statements, commentary, and the conversation that exist within this cultural artifact. Choose ONE narrow aspect of Beyonce’s music video to focus on and create a persuasive, composed argument related to it. Be sure to provide contextualization — the conversation you are entering and/or the problem you are solving. Create a clear, focused, and concise argument. Choose specific details and evidence to prove your argument; lead your reader through your evidence in a purposeful way that explains and persuades.
We discussed writing thesis statements, both in the big picture and in specifics by considering all the component parts of the thesis statement. Write your thesis statement for the Formation Argument Essay here. Please include a few versions of your statement — that is, show me your work building up to the final thesis statement htat you write. You can do this in full sentences, or by breaking it up into parts and then putting them together. In fact, doing both of these things would be most helpful to you.
So write 3 possible thesis statement for the “ Formation “ argumentative essay
link to possible topics: https://www.teenvogue.com/gallery/beyonce-formatio…