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Revise paper

Revise paper

  • Revise submitted work to address errors associated with paraphrasing and quoting academic sources
  • Revise submitted work to address errors associated with the use of APA referencing style
  • Use research tools (such as Google Scholar, research databases, or reputable websites) to find additional accurate information on the health topic.
  • Use their critical thinking skills to determine which sources include reliable, accurate information about the health topic.
  • Paraphrase information on the topic, focusing on the ability to accurately describe the information in their owFor this assignment students will do the following:
    • Revise their previous submission focusing solely on the presentation of accurate information from 1 reputable, reliable, academic source to report accurate information that fixes the incorrect information described in the article. This discussion should include:
      1. 1 direct quote
      2. 4 paraphrased sentences
      3. 1 in-text citation using APA referencing style
      4. A reference page using APA referencing style
    • Find one additional reputable, reliable, academic source to report accurate information that fixes the incorrect information described in the article. This discussion should include:
      1. 1 direct quote
      2. 4 paraphrased sentences
      3. 1 in-text citation using APA referencing style
      4. A reference page using APA referencing style

    The final submission should include 2 paragraphs and an APA style reference page. The first paragraph is the revised content from the first Academic Source Practice Paper and the second paragraph is new information from 1 additional reputable, reliable, academic source.

    Grading Point Structure (20 points)2 points – Technical requirements (excluding grammar, APA, and sources)

    • 0 points – Included 2 or more technical requirement errors
    • 1 point – Included 1 technical requirement error
    • 2 points – Adhered to all technical requirements

    4 points – Correct grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc.

    • 0 points – 6 or more grammatical errors
    • 2 points – 3 – 5 grammatical errors
    • 4 points – Up to 3 grammatical errors

    2 points – APA in-text citations

    • 0 points – No in-text citations
    • 1 points – More than 1 type of error
    • 2 points – APA style used correctly (with only 1 type of error)

    2 points – APA reference page

    • 0 points – No reference page
    • 1 points –More than 1 type of error in use of APA style
    • 2 points – APA style used correctly (with only 1 type of error)

    5 points – Previous Source Discussion

    • 0 points – Absent
    • 5 points – Fixed errors from previous submission related to the use of direct quotes and paraphrasing but some new changes are still incorrect OR Fixed some, but not all, errors related to the use of direct quotes and paraphrasing from prior submission.
    • 5 points – Correctly fixed all errors in previous submission related to the use of direct quotes and paraphrasing.

    5 points – New Source Discussion

    • 0 points – Absent
    • 5 points – Errors associated with use of direct quotes and paraphrasing.
    • 5 points – Appropriate use of direct quotes and paraphrasing to present new source information.

    The following attachment is the paper i submitted that needs to be revised please note.